The Asylum is a short story that appeared on the online magazine, Short Fiction Break. It’s part of a longer story that I hope to one day complete.

I entered the contest as a way to improve my writing. Well, all I really did is pay $50 to have them publish my story. I was supposed to get feedback with story. It was supposed to help me grow as a writer, but I just got told that the story was multi-layered. Apparently, multi-layered is not good for short stories.

Oh, well, what do you think? Go ahead and read it. Let me know what you think about it!

Author: Raymonda

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